Please critique my Pet care info blog...

[kittyluver]

Hi Bloggeries!!!

Would you mind to critique my Pet care info Blog? Hope your criticism will make my blog more informative for the visitors...

Thanks for visiting!!!

[Ferox]

The layout is nice, but you could do with a better header and more careful positioning of your adsense ads so that they are central As I view the page, it pushes your article all the way below the fold.

I find your articles difficult to read and don't agree with many of your points. for example, dogs can concentrate urine, though not as much as cats, and you have said that they don't. "Cats are able to pass concentrated urine unlike the case with dogs."

You also alternate between technical terms and layman's terms. For exaple, you use 'oligouria' without explaining what that means, and use 'pyrexia' and 'fever' interchangably without explaining that they mean the same thing. Your use of technical language is misleading to normal people reading these articles. For example "Some times, anorexia and sore throat may occur." will make your average reader think that the child will develop a neurological problem, not just lose their appetite.

I think you need to write better articles. At the moment they are difficult to read, don't make a lot of sense and look like copy/paste reassembly jobs. I don't mean to insult your writing, but I'm being honest.

[Garcia Coder]

well the layout is quite good and the idea of having an blog for pet care is really intresting.

[MBYork]

I like it, some interesting things on here, good layout too.

I have 4 cats, so will be having a good read tonight

[ghing]

hi kittyluver.. I think you should follow what Ferox said..

She is really good when it comes to blog about pets...

[mirka]

HI, I would change the dark green background color. I think its slightly overwhelming. Otherwise, I love the layout, with the grass and the kitties on the bottom.