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Old April 1st, 2008, 04:55 PM
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Just a quick glance, I shouldn't do this when you want a critique, but I think you should jam over to Wordpress.org and hook up the blog software there. It will only help in the long run.

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I find all the text gets lost amongst all the heavy stuff on the left and right sidebars. Perhaps you need to widen your text box, or make the text larger or something - it seems rather crowded.

I know there are major temptations to add all the widgets we can but if you want to develop a following of readers, it needs to be easy to read and more pleasing to the eye.

Just my own personal opinion - perhaps others might have different ideas.
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think i like your theme... but not your ads block.... the ads maybe is better if you use the same background color of your site, that is black ... and don't use border too (borderless).
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A solid work. I don't like black backgrounds, but thats my personal taste. I can recommend to work with wordpress.
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Black is not nice for readers. If you want people to read your blog with pleasure text must be on a lighter background.
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Like others have said, black is generally a bad idea. Any extreme color, black, white, red, blue, green. At the full level it is too strong for the human eye. A shade of grey would work better, and be more appealing to the eye.

Same with the ads. two columns of them like that is just too much.
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honestly. when i went to your site and read. i'm feeling dizzy..maybe it just me or the too much ads block. btw, black background and white text makes my reading experience boring. if you're serious about blogging, you should get yourself a domain and paid hosting. you wouldn't regret it in the future. hosting would cost like $10 a month nowdays.
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I'm suggest you to keep both of your side bars becoming even more interesting, either by adding other useful tools., or put the calendar on it...

Just make sure to make it looks like more professional to the visitors.
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I'd say you personalize it more. It has a lot of competing visual stimuli that compete for the readers opinion. I"d try and make the content pop out more by relaxing a bit on the sidebar activity.
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