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Old June 22nd, 2009, 01:22 PM
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Hey everyone.

I was wondering if you guys could review or give out your opinion on my personal blog. Its really a non-profit blog, therefore I have no ads or anything. No widgets and I even removed the Entrecard service from my page.

The theme I found, I think it suits well for a personal blog. I actually love the way it looks and works. I believe its just the theme a personal blog should have.

I'm looking for feedback on my writing style, my tone, how I project myself and all those things.

You can find my blog over at: Obed Ward

Thank you very much in advance.
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Old June 23rd, 2009, 11:59 AM
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Hi Andre,
I love the content in your blog. It is very informative and a fairly easy read. My only comment to you though is to use spell check before publishing, you have several spelling mistakes and a few grammatical errors.
Good luck,
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I really like it. The content is really interesting. I liked the elegant themes template better, but that's just me.
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Old June 24th, 2009, 12:39 PM
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Nice, pleasant theme.

Writing is enthousiastic and upbeat, but I agree with Jpinmiami that you should look to a spelling program or something, so you can filter out the errors.

Good luck!
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Old June 25th, 2009, 12:07 AM
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I like your writing style and content. But in my opinion I think it could use a little color. The template seems empty to me. I like the sleek minimalistic look, just a splash of color would be good enough for me.

Great work.
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Old June 25th, 2009, 12:43 AM
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I agree that a little color wouldn't hurt.. of course, that is to your personal preference, but I would think the average visitor to your blog would be more drawn in if you splashed a little flavor around the page
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Old June 26th, 2009, 01:14 PM
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lack of widgets = very good move ... I like it. good content, good layout!
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Like the simplistic design.
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I like it. i really enjoyed your latest post about 5 firefox extensions you could do with out (i have firefox and dont use alot of extensions
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Your blog really caught me off guard. I was expecting the "stripped down blog" look. However, I thought some of your post were informative. My big recommendation would be to add a little color (I know it has been said a few times already, but it was the only real advice I had).
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