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Old November 23rd, 2007, 11:25 AM
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Old November 23rd, 2007, 12:26 PM
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Default Re: My Fashion Blog.

IMO, you should categorize your every post.. just label it for you to be able to categorize it.. and also decreasing the number of your post on your homepage can help..
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Default Re: My Fashion Blog.

Welcome to the community - I moved your post from Introductions here as it's the place to talk about your blogs.

Lot's of dead space too much white and the header is too busy to get a grip of what your blog is about. All I remember seeing is vogue. Ever thought of your own domain?

How long have you been blogging for and do you have any other blogs?
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Old December 15th, 2007, 11:34 AM
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In addition to the above, your header is too big to fit within the preset template's box....so you have the lines showing still for a smaller one and the header hangs way off to the right instead of being centered above your blog text. Do you have any experience in HTML?

As for the header itself, I love the idea....but the Vogue part was rather distracting for me. It was repeated so many times that I had to look for the Live Speak Breathe Fashion that was on top...and considering that's your blog's name, that should have more emphasis. Simply choosing photos that don't have the VOGUE on each one could make a huge difference, because I love the idea and the rest looks good....it's just so busy.

I kinda like your idea to emphasize certain words/phrases in your posts. At first, it was rather distracting as my eyes immediately hopped to those places, skipping over other words, and causing me to have a hard time following what was being said. At the same time, it 'did' draw me into the post in the first place, so I guess that's a good thing.

Completely unrelated to the way the blog looks, having your email address listed might get you some spam like that.....bots can scrape it and automate BS, so I'd suggest considering an image like mine: You can get one here. It may or may not fit on your sidebar, though, which is why I noticed in the first place....it was chopped off, oops!

With a bit of cleanup work, I think you've got a good thing going. I love all the photos and between those and your varied text, it really keeps the reader's eye moving across the page.
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