Need some help :)

[shoeboxpost]

So I've been blogging a little more, and just was hoping you guys could help me out, by telling me if I need to work on anything, or should I just keep it the way it is?
some criticism would be nice
thanks in advance!
-shoeboxpost

http://shoeboxpost.blogspot.com

[AgentHomes]

You might consider getting your own url address. It provides a lot more "street cred" over a blogspot site.

[Techmaker]

Originally Posted by AgentHomes

You might consider getting your own url address. It provides a lot more "street cred" over a blogspot site.

Yes Get your own URL. Don't worry about the money you spend... It will worth.

[Melody]

Originally Posted by shoeboxpost

So I've been blogging a little more, and just was hoping you guys could help me out, by telling me if I need to work on anything, or should I just keep it the way it is?
some criticism would be nice
thanks in advance!
-shoeboxpost

http://shoeboxpost.blogspot.com

I don't get your blog at all. You've got it set up like an online store, though it's not clear if anything is for sale. You post pictures of shoes, but you don't have first hand reviews, or pictures that YOU created. And the "about us" page doesn't help me understand why you're posting shoe ads.

Sorry.

If you love shoes, I suggest a blog with a niche that is personalized to you: Your shoes you've bought, and how you like them.

If you're an online catalog, just make it more clear what you're doing, but then you're not really a "blog."