New Blog!

[jckychng]

hey everyone,

i recently started a blogging project at my school. it's a bunch of thoughts and experiences written by several students. i'm looking for some critiques for you guys!

http://clarkisme.com

side note: some buildings and names might be unrecognizable, but for the most part, you should understand the content!

thank you!
-jacky

[jckychng]

i'm looking for any suggestions on format and content... :/

[LloydBurrell]

As far as the content is concerned, it's OK, it depends on what you want to do with it. That is, your target readers. Create some categories and tags. Those should help surfers find their way through your blog.

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Lloyd Burrell
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Office Desk Reviews

[FALSL]

I find the layout of your blog quite workable,
the problem?
i really do not connect with your writings.
I am sure for someone, not me, they are good.
I am just not your target.

[Place2Play]

I like it a lot and the content is really interesting to me~ =)

[Iwineverything]

I thought you were quite funny.

Keep it up!

[brynh]

Interesting theme chosen.. Maybe you should consider putting b/w pictures too.. I think it will be better for your current theme.

[jckychng]

thanks so much for everyone's input! this is really a project for school. the writings are by different students, and i'm looking for "coherent individuality." that said, it's suppose to show the random thoughts of students and that may be why the writing's not as deep. thanks again for the thoughts! i'll definitely be taking your advices and such.

[randall]

I really do like the blog's layout look; it's pretty nice. I just don't know where to go first.. usually I need some direction, so that I get a good idea of the blog's layout. Otherwise, I get distracted and don't want to read. It may just be me, though.

You're sorta funny, but it's the sort of humor we've all heard before and was only mildly funny then, sorry. I don't mean to be brutal, but I need to be honest in a critique (otherwise, what's the point?).

Perhaps you could return the favor? Here are my blogs:
Blogographer | IDKLOLBBQ! | Brighter Earth

[jckychng]

hey randall, thanks for your comments!

your comment about the humor (i won't lie; it sorta stung at first) definitely helps me reflect on how the blog is progressing.

while i started this blog for students at my school, i put it out here to see if anyone else could relate to it. the blog is actually kept by several students, which will come to bring out different perspectives soon enough!

as for your blogs, i especially enjoyed reading blogographer. the reviews are well-composed and you've picked out some quality blogs. my only suggestion is that, while the blog is prefectly presentable, i would like to see more personalization. for my personal blogs, i always opt for simple with an original header, because i like to focus on the content itself. but that's a personal preference and your layout would probably be different. nonetheless, i'd like to see a differentiating factor in your blog.