Re: New blog post
I think the first thing I noticed was your blog's name. I'm okay with it, but a lot of people may find it a bit more offensive than they'd like. Even so, I think "Sportsgasm" would be better than just "Sportgasm". That's a personal opinion, though.
I think you should break up the blocks of text you have. They make it easier on the reader (A LOT easier, haha), and people will thus want to read more. I like the way you deliver information though; it worked well for me, and I don't even watch soccer! Also, maybe split your about into 2 or 3 paragraphs, even if it is short. A block of text is intimidating to even the best of readers.
I would switch the About Me and the Follow section's positions. It seems to me that a reader will not be interested in the Follow section right away, and thus should be one of the last things they encounter. Your About Me will catch them, however, and if they like it, they will find the Follow section regardless of being on top or bottom.
Make it so that less posts appear on the front page at once; it's a lot to scroll through and it lags my computer a bit. If someone wants to find something, they will look through older posts. Also, add a search bar, please. It's hard to find information.
The layout is also very, very plain. Update it to include sporty themes, and keep the reader interested. Nothing too showy, though.
Perhaps, also, be a little more consistent with posting? It's alright, for now, but with more readers waiting for posts, you might want to have a schedule (such as every Wednesday, or every Wednesday and Sunday, etc.)
Other than that, I like the content, a lot. Good luck with your blogging, and check out mine, please? I'd love some feedback, maybe some comments. :] Link is in the signature.
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