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[mtaylor507]

Hello everyone I am new to the blogging world and I am currently working on two blogs....I only have one up and running right now and thought I'd ask all you kind folks to drop by and tell me what you think.....


Please be harsh and as curl as you can.....Give me some constructive feed back and try to hurt my felling.....i want to get better at this blogging stuff and want the cold honest truth.....The site is a little rough you have to remember I am new...

Politicalrights's Blog

[RabidReptile]

It has a nice clean layout, is easy to read, and you often don't see blogs that are aligned to the left like that which makes it kind of unique. I think it would improve your blog to add some extra color—a header image might help.

[Melody]

I think gray lettering against a white background is hard to read. Since you only have two blog posts up, it's still a little difficult to give feedback on content: You don't have much content up.

[tbaoo]

hi there, i know we're limited in some way by our templates .. is that very large right hand burgundy section able to be reduced in any way ? it would balance out the page a lot better - good luck - cheers alan

[mtaylor507]

Originally Posted by Melody

I think gray lettering against a white background is hard to read. Since you only have two blog posts up, it's still a little difficult to give feedback on content: You don't have much content up.

Yea I certainly understand that and I am thankful for your comments. It is a brand new blog and I am working very hard to get it up and running. I do however have another blog that is up and running on bloger.com it's low on content as well but I'm working on this to....Thank you for your help and if you have any tips at all about how to get some ideas for content I would love to here them.

both my sites are listed below thanks so much for your help

[tbaoo]

hi mtaylor - i had to leave a comment on your gun craze blog - cheers alan

[mtaylor507]

Originally Posted by tbaoo

hi mtaylor - i had to leave a comment on your gun craze blog - cheers alan

Hey there I wanted to say thank you for the comment

[RabidReptile]

Originally Posted by Melody

I think gray lettering against a white background is hard to read. Since you only have two blog posts up, it's still a little difficult to give feedback on content: You don't have much content up.

I just looked at your site on a different computer with lighter color settings, and now I agree, the gray is a bit difficult to read. I think if you just darkened it a bit, it would be fine.

Your Blogger blog is nice, but I think the ads at the top are distracting.

[Melody]

Originally Posted by mtaylor507

Hello everyone I am new to the blogging world and I am currently working on two blogs....I only have one up and running right now and thought I'd ask all you kind folks to drop by and tell me what you think.....


Please be harsh and as curl as you can.....Give me some constructive feed back and try to hurt my felling.....i want to get better at this blogging stuff and want the cold honest truth.....The site is a little rough you have to remember I am new...

Politicalrights's Blog

I went to your "Gun Craze" blog based on our conversation in this thread. There, from what I can see, you only have 2 blog posts up. Again it's very hard to give meaningful criticism or feedback or praise when there is so little content.

Given that the "gun craze" blog is so new, I would get rid of all the Google ads. I understand that people want their blogs to earn money (well, some people, I have no interest in earning money from mine) but at this point you're still developing reader trust and a relationship with your readers.

Personally, I'm no fan of blogs/articles that spout big vague ideals with not a concrete analysis of specific things. But I will have to wait to see what happens with your future blog posts.

Good luck!

Since I have reviewed your blog, I hope that you will review mine too: Here's the link to the thread in this forum about my blog: http://www.bloggeries.com/forum/show...sentation.html

[josechukkiri]

Visited your both the blogs. The wordpress blog is very nice to view. But the letters are very small. It is difficult to read to me. The blogger blog is OK. All the best.