Thoughts on the Human Race

[mrtrolah]

Thoughts on the Human Race

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Warning : Some explicit language.

[DailyDrinker]

Originally Posted by mrtrolah

Made it just yesterday. Please provide feedback, follow, comment, whatever you seem fit.

Warning : Some explicit language.

Is there any reason why you chose to start a blogger blog instead of having your own self hosted blog?

[mrtrolah]

What do you mean? I have no credit card to buy a .com domain, and I had always seen blogspot.com as one of the major blogs.

[Melody]

Originally Posted by mrtrolah

Thoughts on the Human Race

Made it just yesterday. Please provide feedback, follow, comment, whatever you seem fit.

Warning : Some explicit language.

Well, you have lots of tiny typos all over your content. You have an I've as just "Iv" and "its" where you need the apostrophe - "it's". It might not mean much to you but you have enough little typos to look sloppy.

I don't know what that Alexa page rank widget on the bottom is, and I'd remove it if I were you. Most people who want to read movie/celebrity reviews as you feature probably aren't concerned by what your Alexa rank is.

Your content sounds very youthful. You sound like a kid giving your opinion on whatever. Though, the funny thing is, you make some sharp observations and I have the same thoughts as about Johnny Depp yet again trying to play the most wackiest cartoony character that he can find. I have no idea who Justin Bieber is, and it is beyond me why he might be popular.

If you keep it up, you have something to work with for sure. You're in a tough niche to compete though because I suspect that there are a million and one places online to go for movie reviews or celebrity criticism. And at this point you only have less than a handful of blog entries. Though I recommend that you post new content about 3 to 5 per week, steadily over time, rather rapid fire post a bunch of new posts all at one time.

What are you trying to accomplish with your blog?

Good luck!

[mrtrolah]

Thanks for the feedback, I was considering getting rid of that horrible banner at the bottom in fact. I shall fix the typo's. Yes, It is a hard niche and that is why I am going to have to speak my mind, on what people will hopefully agree with (as with yourself and Johnny Depp.

What do you mean by youthful writing? How shall I improve on this?

P.S Fixed most typo's I think - also removed some explicit language, replaced some words etc. Removed horrible bottom banner.

[pembroke]

I like the colour scheme, very warm and pleasent to look at.

[mrtrolah]

Haha thanks

[mrtrolah]

Anything else would verily much be appreciated

[drummer_412]

I like it, but fix the typos.

[mrtrolah]

They were fixed