Thoughts on the Human Race

[mrtrolah]

Cheers Thanks alot

[mrtrolah]

Comments appreciated

[veikoh]

Nice blog but where are your thoughs about human species?

[axiomwolf]

I agree with Melody, the content is youthful and a bit random. Also, you might want to consider the fact that most people will not finish the rest of a blog entry if the intro is boring.

""The 17th century falls into the Early Modern period of Europe and was characterized by the Baroque cultural movement, the French Grand Siècle dominated by Louis XIV, and the beginning of modern science and philosophy, including the contributions by bloody warfare throughout the century, by the Thirty Years' War, the Great Turkish War, the end of the Dutch Revolt and the English Civil War among others, while European colonization of the Americas began in earnest."[1]"

That's going to put people to sleep. They won't get past the first sentence before they ditch. You'll definitely want to put a lot of hard work into creating interesting and exciting content. If you just want to rant and don't care if anyone reads that's one thing. But if you genuinely want your blog to be successful it's got to be a whole lot more than that. Click on your own blog and start reading, then ask yourself "Do I really care? Would I spend my valuable time on this if it were someone else's blog?"

Good luck to you.

[mrtrolah]

@veikoh its a title

Axiom thanks, yea i was considering taking that paragraph away. Also, ranting is pretty much childish

[mrtrolah]

I deleted first 2 posts because well., thats when I thought noone would read my blog so I did random posts. Also deleted some other crap noone wants to read - in short, I cleaned up. Thanks for the feedback.

[mrtrolah]

New Blogpost on the future of our species portrayal in the media. thoughts etc appreciated.