Warfare two Tips - Be harsh

[Diagonalspoon]

Hey everyone, I have been blogging for 3 weeks now. When I first made my blog it didn't look very good. I got some good feedback from people on this site. Please take a look now and be harsh! Any help or advice would be greatly appreciated.

Blog - http://www.warfaretwotips.blogspot.com

[Mac100x]

Hi, Diagonal I have noticed over these 3 weeks you have made a big difference to the blog! It looks excellent and I think you are doing very well! I really can't be much harsh because I think your blog is just superb! There are lots of images and no doubt your blog has so much detail. And also thanks to your blog I now am much better at Modern Warfare 2!

One thing to note is that you might want to make your font a bit of a whiteish colour so some people might not have a hard time reading your great info! You could see the font on my blog, it is also a bit of a white colour.

[dibbs98]

i like the template, very appropriate to your subject matter, perhaps you should try and look at what u can offer the reader that other websites on mod warfare 2 don't. e.g. more personalised experiences, opinions on certain things.

[ChickenFreak]

Some random observations:

- Overall, it looks like a "real" site. This is good.

- The grey text on a black background is a little hard for me to read. Now, I'm Old, with old eyes, and therefore am outside your primary target readership. But you might want to consider increasing the contrast between text and background.

- That top right text-based ad block is bothering me. The rest of the layout, even the top center ad, seems clean and well-planned and appropriate for a site with real content, and then that text ad block takes you one step toward looking like a "just for the ads" content-free site. It doesn't take you over the edge, but I think it's closer than you want to be.

- I consider tags to be pretty important in a site, and your "Labels" block is in a pretty hard-to-find position. You might want to move it up. (Maybe in place of the ad block I just complained about. )

- There are a moderate number of grammar issues in your writing - not enough to make it hard to read, but enough to notice. Your writing is sort of "forum casual" instead of "blog semi-formal". I have no idea if this is a big issue in your niche, because I don't know your niche, but I wanted to mention it.