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Old January 15th, 2010, 10:29 PM
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We just love pretty girl and we love to share it with the world, that the reason behind the creation of this site, JustPrettyGirl.com and it is all about the pretty girl.

All the comment are welcome for us to improve it.

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Old January 15th, 2010, 11:14 PM
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Okay that is not a rated G website. It looks totally professional and nothing to review except that the content is the kind that objectifies very young women.
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i guess your target audience are young hetero men (and possibly some women?)... i don't know, just sort of makes me feel creepy when i go to it. is there some way to not make it creepy? (possibly in how you present it?)

nonetheless, it's certainly comes off as a professional site
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Okay that is not a rated G website. It looks totally professional and nothing to review except that the content is the kind that objectifies very young women.
Thanks for your comment Melody. We will review it.
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i guess your target audience are young hetero men (and possibly some women?)... i don't know, just sort of makes me feel creepy when i go to it. is there some way to not make it creepy? (possibly in how you present it?)

nonetheless, it's certainly comes off as a professional site
Thanks jckychng for your comment. Btw could you explain on the "creepy"?

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Old January 16th, 2010, 02:36 AM
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Are you male or female "JustPrettyGirl"? It is a creepy website. Any website which encourages very young women to pose in highly sexualized clothing, and essentially encourages young women to look like sex objects is NOT cool in my book. Sure, lots of guys will love your site. But women who look like they're barely adults in sexual poses is just gross.
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yes i agree with melody.

i think the problem is that you're portraying the women as overly youthful. in the pictures, they seem innocent and almost gives the idea of exploitation. therefore, any person who likes looking at the idea of exploitation is, in my opinion, creepy.

there are ways to make your site less creepy, but that may change your site a lot. (i'm not sure how much you want to change) perhaps you could try to go for sexy, like maxim, instead of innocence and extreme youthfulness. there's a reason maxim is well-known and it is how they depict their models.

ps: that is not to say i read maxim.....
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Thanks for the review guys. We will take up the advise and see what we could do to make the site better.

Thanks again guys. Appreciated
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pretty girls indeed :P
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Congrats for ur blog, nice girls...nice descriptions...and nice layout!
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If you are 18 where are your parents. What are you thinking. It does seem to be a "pro" blog. But if you are a "pro" stop hiding.
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