pretend to write

[jckychng]

hi all,

so today is the first day of a new blog! "pretend to write" is a collection of short stories. since i'm not a student in literature, this is just for fun. i hope you can take the time to read it (if you're into reading short stories...) and lemme know what you think!

here's the link

thank youuuu,
-jacky

[purpledab]

good luck ahead...

[workinghard]

I think that you are a good visusal writer. However, the piece reads more like a screen play with back and forth dialog. The concept is interesting, your leadin was also interesting. I think that some of the dialog needs to be given more background information. Hope this helps

[jblogz]

Very well written, keep up the good work!