Critique My First Blog

[MexicansStareAtMe]

Hey guys!

I'm new to the blogging world, but have a real passion for my blogging topic. While I'd like to be able to generate money from it, my first passion is providing useful entertainment and information.

Give me any feedback, look at my source code, tell me any ways I might improve it please!

[Nathan]

It looks like you have found a topic that you are passionate about. However, I think that you need to work on finding a better theme which will suit your topic. The plain black is light but it won't create any lasting impressions when it comes to visitors remembering your blog.

The first thing I would work on is finding a good looking free theme to spruce your blog up some.

[MexicansStareAtMe]

Where do you suggest I look?

Thanks Nathan, you're awesome. I really appreciate how you take the time to reply to my posts.

[Nathan]

In the Bloggers subforum here on Bloggeries we have a stickied post with a nice list of free Blogger template sites:

http://www.bloggeries.com/forum/blog...ate-sites.html

Thanks Nathan, you're awesome. I really appreciate how you take the time to reply to my posts.

No problem, that's part of my job here.

[stacylee]

I agree that you could use a new theme. Check here or just google 'free word press themes'. I searched and searched for a theme for my cooking blog and FINALLY found one I liked. I wanted something different - one I had never seen before.

[MexicansStareAtMe]

Very cool blog stacy lee

[himmatsj]

im in the same boat as you too my friend

[Workforced]

You seem to have repeated some of your post content. That's never a good start. I'm not sure why your blog has the name it does either - I can't make the connection to the posts. that said, you've built it and populated it with content so good for you!

[MexicansStareAtMe]

Originally Posted by Workforced

You seem to have repeated some of your post content. That's never a good start. I'm not sure why your blog has the name it does either - I can't make the connection to the posts. that said, you've built it and populated it with content so good for you!

It's about "Hair Metal"

[Redinc]

Nice blog, mabe you could change the template. Find something not so dark.