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Old July 6th, 2009, 01:55 PM
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Yes, I made a Swine Flu (H1N1 virus) blog. Hopefully it will help some people out; let me know what you think about it. I recently made some color changes but anyway I'd love to hear any comments or constructive criticism...

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Old July 6th, 2009, 02:33 PM
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The template need some serious work. In addition, the posts use strange font sizes and colors that don't look quite right.

Your table showing the death rates by countries needs alignment on the cell items.

I think that your content has potential, but you need to work on the presentation and make it look a little more professional.
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Old July 6th, 2009, 04:31 PM
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Default Re: Do I Have Swine Flu?! Need Reviews :)

Thanks very much for the input.. I've made some changes -- let me know what you think Also, are you in Firefox?
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Old July 6th, 2009, 04:34 PM
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That looks better. The black font is much more professional than the blue that you had before. However, the table is still flawed. The attached screenshot shows you what I'm seeing.

The table is cut off and the numbers are not centered in their cells.

By the way, I do use Firefox.
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Old July 6th, 2009, 05:09 PM
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Fixed! Thanks again.
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Hi there,

Nice blog, I was wondering how long it would take for someone to do one.

But good job, nice work. Keep it up
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Hi,

Nice looking blog. I think the color choices are good, and the adsense are almost hidden. Good job, keep posting
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Old July 6th, 2009, 05:57 PM
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Fixed! Thanks again.
That looks considerably better. It is simple things like this that make a huge difference in the appearance of your site.
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I like it but I think that to make people come back to it you will need to update it more with UK news. There is informaton coming through almost daily about areas of new outbreaks so it would be a good idea to include some of that I think.
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Default Re: Do I Have Swine Flu?! Need Reviews :)

Also, if the blog is called 'Do I have swine flu?' it is only in the first post that you give details about symptoms etc and I had to scroll through three massive long tables to get to it - could you possibly include this crucial information in the sidebar and use the blog for swine flu updates?

I think it is a really good idea and more and more people are going to be looking at blogs like yours over the coming months... Good luck
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