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I hate the roll over ads even though I have one on one of my sites.

Above the fold as viewed on my Mac is mostly ads, sort of a turn off for me.

I would kill the "recent comments" since they all belong to you. Or change your name to someone famous. Everyone would check out the posts if Elvis, Kid Rock, George Bush......commented.

Your right side is a mess, not sure if you did it on purpose? I like messy stuff, since I generally pass over nice neat stuff.

I would try for more powerful titles like "Why You Suck At Blogging" instead of your more passive titles. You might want to figure out your keywords and work them into your titles.

I like the way you structure your posts, you break up the paragraphs well.

From your home page I can't figure out how to leave a comment!

OK, now it's your turn review mine.